Drafting and planning- Analysis of first magazine draft

I don't like my first magazine draft very much as I don't like the layout. I have four separate photos of the band members which I saw in an edition of NME with four different pictures of the Arctic Monkeys members in a similar format. However I don't think this worked as well as all the pictures were different and there was no link between the members, such as wearing similar clothes and doing similar poses in the same location. I like the logo 'CMM' because I like the simplicity with the plain dark red colour scheme. Although I might consider changing the font and perhaps adding the whole title 'Cobain Melodic Music' in small underneath the acronym.